5 writing practices that can fix 95% of your authoring problems
- Denny Segelstrom

- Feb 9
- 3 min read
The 95 to 5% of Writing: 5 Habits That Solve 95% of Your Authoring Problems
Most writers believe that "better writing" comes from a larger vocabulary or a deeper understanding of complex grammar. In reality, great writing isn't about what you add—it’s about what you clarify.
Whether you are writing a technical manual, a LinkedIn post, or a novel, most "authoring problems" boil down to confusion, clutter, and friction. If you can eliminate those, your work instantly moves into the top 5% of all content.

Here are the five high-leverage practices to transform your prose.
1. Kill the "Zombie" Sentences
A "Zombie" sentence is one that wanders aimlessly, kept alive by commas and conjunctions, never quite reaching a point. When you pack three or four ideas into one sentence, you force the reader to do the heavy lifting of sorting them out.
The Practice: The One Idea Rule: If a sentence contains a "which," an "and," and a "but," it’s likely a candidate for a period.
The Fix: Split them. Give every thought its own room to breathe.
2. Practice "Bottom Line Up Front"
We are taught in school to build an argument and reveal the conclusion at the end. In the digital age, this is a recipe for being ignored. If a reader doesn't know why they are reading a paragraph by the end of the first sentence, they will likely stop.
The Practice: Lead with the punchline. Use the first sentence of every paragraph to state your claim, then use the following sentences to provide evidence.
The Fix: Read the first sentence of every paragraph in your draft. Do they tell a coherent story on their own? If not, move your conclusions to the top.
3. Replace "Be" with "Do"
Weak writing relies on "state of being" verbs (is, am, are, was, were). These verbs are static; they describe a scene but don't move the story forward. This is the root cause of the dreaded "passive voice."
The Practice: Hunt for "is" and "was." Try to replace them with an active verb that shows movement or decision.
Passive: There was a feeling of dread in the room.
Active: Dread filled the room.
The Fix: Turning "is" into an action verb often cuts your word count and doubles your impact.
4. The "Ear Test" for Natural Rhythm
We don't just read with our eyes; we read with our inner ear. If your writing feels "clunky" or "robotic," it’s usually because the sentence lengths are too uniform.
The Practice: Read your work out loud. Your tongue will trip over overused words, and your lungs will tell you when a sentence is too long.
The Fix: Vary your sentence length. Use short sentences for impact. Use medium ones for description. Use long ones for flow.
5. Edit for "Signal-to-Noise"
In engineering, "noise" is anything that interferes with the message. In writing, noise is "filler" words. Words like very, really, just, basically, and perhaps act as linguistic padding. They make you sound less confident and make your writing harder to scan.
The Practice: The 20% Cut. Challenge yourself to reduce the word count of your first draft by 20% without removing any of the actual information.
The Fix: Delete every adverb (words ending in -ly) and see if the sentence still stands. Usually, it’s stronger without them

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